
Chapter Three of Dragon Slayer has now been published! With that, all of the pre-written content of Dragon Slayer has been completed. I don’t fully know what will happen to the story from this point on. It’s possible it’ll get picked up by another commissioner, or it might get publicly funded. I know that one or two people expressed interest in picking up the commission, but… spoilers follow.
SPOILERS AHEAD FOR DRAGON SLAYER! YE BE WARNED
Chapter three makes a hard commitment into territory that the first two chapters have teased: femdom. I’ve experimented with the feeling before in one shot shortform stories, and even once or twice in chapters or character arcs in my longform stories (if you know you know; I wouldn’t want to spoil it). Until now though, I’ve never really had it being a recurring theme, nor, as one reader pointed out saliently, something the main male protagonist doesn’t feel the need to overcome somehow.
Admittedly, this bothers me. As much as I like to think I push boundaries, I have to concede that a lot of my stories fall into pretty conventional gender roles. Usually in my heterosexual stories, the woman initiates, the guy soft-leads, and they play into temporary dynamics from there. Not usually much different. Nicole from Being More Social is bossier outside of sex but is clearly a switch in sex. Other characters get moments of wanting to dominate that don’t usually last beyond a few chapters. So, spoilers be damned, I want to make something clear up top:
I want Dragon Slayer, no matter what, to be a story where the male lead plays with submission, and the female lead plays with domming, as a general rule. I don’t want it to be something that Austin feels he needs to fix or overcome.
Saying this does shut a few doors and maybe some of you don’t like the spoiler, but given some people have already asked me if you can pick up the commission, I want you to know what you’re getting into. If I start writing the story and you have to go, “Actually, can we change this? I don’t like Austin experimenting with butt stuff. Can he dominate Kelsea and call her his good girl instead?”, this will be one of the times I flatly say no. The main reason why is as simple as it is laughable – I already have a lot of stories with this general vibe of set up (shy dude x sarcastic and witty dudette with more power than him) and most of them completely escape the realm of true femdom. I’d rather this story do something a little different sexually.
If that’s not for you, no worries. not only are my other works here, but I’ll be, of course, writing more. I think I’d rather people know about this since there’s a certain type of reader out there that expects their preferred erotic story to follow a kind of pattern (no specific pattern – they just know what they like) and they might feel deceived if they read too many chapters and realize they’ve been reading a fetish that doesn’t quite make them tick. And hey, fair. I’ve written many a sex scene containing content I wasn’t crazy about myself.
But if I’m going to do this, I’m going to commit. I’m making no promises about much of anything aside from this, but I want Dragon Slayer to be, first and foremost, a story where a guy discovers his submissive side. As a non-submissive in my personal life, I also just want the challenge and novelty of attempting to write this, especially in a longform context. I always like branching out and writing new things – I just am set in my ways and perhaps am bad at truly finding myself in novel territory. So, this is me, committing.
Anyways, I hope you enjoyed the chapter! And if you haven’t read it yet, nice job spoiling it for yourself but hey, give it a read anyway. You might surprise yourself! I’ll talk to you all soon.
I’m actually really intrigued to see this dynamic. Even in past stories where it was played with, it was just that, playing. Or perhaps it was more “prepatory.” The girl would take charge and lead but it felt more temporary until the male lead could, well, take lead. So I’m interested to see how a dynamic like this will play out in your work. But I will say this, as mentioned in previous topics, the age gap is going to be something that will inevitably draw some ire or raised eyebrows. So whether thats something to address, or something to leave alone, I’m not sure. But I will say this, Bravo on the butt play; very unexpected!
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